One evening these to boys where in class and a zombie came in the class. The zombies’ came to Jake and eatid his Brian of. Jake turned into a zombie Jake was caching speak. Speak was running he was so scared. Jake has long hair and a tong like venom it is made out of venom he is not funny he has bad temper he is very scary and really bad . Jake was running form speck. speck ran out the school they ran all around the neaber hood. They went into a abended place speck was really scared he did not like it. Another zombie was there dead on the floor. Speck was stuck he did not no what to do. he was dust standing there he tried to escape the zombie’s in the room he did not let him the zombie tried to eat his brain. there was a big bat on the floor speck picked it up and bated the zombie’s in the face the zombie’s head came of speck. Speck ran out the door like the dash the only zombie’s what was there was Jake. Jake ran out the door like the flash to speck sour a motorbike speck sat on the moter bike the moter bike was full speed speck looked back there was more zombies coming for him speck did not no what to do he turned the corner straight. the zombie’s climend on top of Each other they made a motor bike speck came of the moter bike and speck went in the tool shop he got a sored when speck went back out side the sky was pitch black speck loked back the zombies where right be hined him he was really scared in the middle of nower there was a man who shoed up speck eyes wide open with joy so much the man cooled James he had a big moter bike his bike was really big it had 900000000 speed James has smooth hair long coat black shoes he smells like oil speck jumped on the big motor bike it looked like they zoomed in space it was really weird je tried to get away so bad when he was on the moter bike they went into the see and converted into a boat they went so fast the zombie gavort to gever and mad a boat the boat was really big like a giant he was bigger and wider than the whole earth people was really scared people where getting stepped on they got really hurt a lot. some people where really scared the monser looked like a giant from a animie because there was a poshen what made him really strong and it made him look like a demon he had sharp teef his hair was really spikey his scull was showing his riped skin was bleeding on the floor it looked like there was billions of pieces of blood it look like there was a sky scraper in the sky to the sky was orange and they jumped out of the sky and they had guns they where killing a lot of people some people had blood dripping out there head while the boolits while they where holding a bloody dagger whith such a goust
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hello miss ivied been working more on my story
Wow Kai!
There is so much exciting action in this story. I particularly love the part when Jake uses the giant bat in the battle.
Keep writing!
I thought that Speck would be safe once James arrived, smelling of oil! He seems to have found himself in serious danger now. That monster sounds absolutely terrifying.
I understand that the motorbike transformed into a boat when it hit the sea but I’m a bit confused about where Speck is now and if James is with him. Can you edit this section, so it’s a bit clearer please.