If you read the title you would know that I am talking about things I hate. You are probably saying well hate’s a strong word. I KNOW. These are things I wish were not on Earth I wish these thing vanished when Thanos snapped his fingers. All jokes aside I am actually going to start.
- SPIDERS
They are the most disgusting most disturbing, ugly, horrible DISGUSTING things you will ever see while you’re on Earth. When you’re reading this people may have discovered how to travel to other planets so THEY THE MOST DISGUSTING THING ON EARTH (maybe the universe I can’t read the future
- SPIDERS
I know I have already talked about them but I hate them so much that I think they deserve to be on this list TWICE. I mean being on this list is bad enough but to be put on it twice well that just tells you about how much I hate them.
- UNICORNS
I don’t hate them that much I mean their cute but I feel like they are wayyyyyy to overused.
- SWEETS
I am joking who hates sweets you might but I do. I love them so much that if I could only choose 1 thing to bring to a stranded island I would choose sweets (and maybe a toothbrush so my teeth don’t fall out rot because I don’t want that).
I 🧡 the way you address your reader directly and the fact that a post about hate is filled with so much humour! I agree, the spiders ‘deserve’ a double entry on the list. 🕷️🕷️
You are fast becoming a superstar blogger. 🤩
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Unicorns are great .I don’t see why you put them on this list . Is it because they are fat these days or because their heads are so big they could fall over because of the weight
Those aren’t real unicorns so I, on behalf of all unicorns, say that you have never seen a real unicorn and therefore I think that you shouldn’t judge them based on their adorableness and overused ness
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