Hi, here is my poem.
Today I saw a magical animal,
In pink, blue and black.
It’s furry ears and beautiful nose,
It’s curly tail and non-human toes,
I wasn’t fussed about them until now,
I was mesmerised!
It was pretending to be a cow!
It ate some grass then mooed at me,
Once a creature that was so elegant had turned into a pest,
A wasp, a louse, but not a bee,
Oh no, this creature started to moo,
Then it flew!
I never knew pigs could fly!
Well done for publishing your first post! ?
It also happens to be the first poem published on The Writing Web. ??
Your humour tickled me and reminded me of Spike Milligan’s and Michael Rosen’s poems. ?
I ? this line: ‘Its curly tail and non-human toes’!
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great and funny poem congratulatios
Fantastic poem!! Well done!
i have never heard anything like it
great poem