I absolutely love music it is my favorite thing in the hole wide world. I preictally like rap, the first rapper I heard was Central Cee. I went to a consort with my mum and when I got there the rapper that was on the stage was Central Cee I was amidelotly fell in love with the music. Even Theo I didn’t know any of the words I still tried to rap it. That was about 1 year ago now but Central is still my favorite rapper to this day. I do have some other favorite rapper and there names are Digga D Arrdee and this next person isn’t really a rapper they are tecnely a rap singer but I wanted to say them there name it is TheKidLaroi. those are my top rappers and my favorite rappers in my apinyan. Arrdee is really young he is about 19 and he has over 100k subscribers on YouTube and in Spotify he has lots of songs but I’m going to tell you his most popular song and how much monthly listeners he has on Spotify so the first is Flowers say my name and it has 21,942,972 monthly listeners that is a lot.
I want to be a rapper when I am older because I like rapping most of the songs and I am good at rapping and I don’t get stage fret so I wont get scared on stage. It is my pason I ever want to be a Basketball player and play for the Lakers or the heat or be a rapper and I really want to be a rapper. I have a rapper name already it is Clocky Kash. I see lots of rappers that have cars and stuff in there videos but not me. I will have short clips and pictures in mine. If I become a rapper the place I want to be is at festivals, win a Momzi and that’s not all of it I wont to be rich but I know that doesn’t just come in a flash I will be absolutely fine with working hard to complete that dream. My granddad said if I do good at school then he will get me a diamonded grill. I was really happy that he said that because lots of rappers have them and I also have a dimoned watch and a silver and gold chain I have a lot of jewelry and it is all real.


I can tell how important rap music is to you, because you have written about it with such passion, including lots of relevant details.
Today, we’ll look at paragraphing and how you can bring the atmosphere that Central Cee concert to life.
We talked about appropriate pictures last time, Gang signs are not appropriate.
Yes KashFishy! I am so impressed that you have stopped rushing and are now including some really interesting detailed information about being a rap star. I love the way you have a clear vision for what kind of rap star you want to be and have described this so clearly in your second paragraph.
You are in an excellent place to start using the connective key ring to help you organise some of this information in a more sophisticated way. We will work on this in today’s lesson.
Keep writing!