One day I was at my uncle’s house, playing with my two cousins the same age as me. I have one younger cousin and I was playing my favourite game and she was next to me. I was into the game so much I would not move from this mobile game if you said you were taking me to Disneyland. It was a racing game. My heart was racing, I was in front of my opponent and he dashed past me. My lips got dry like a desert. My heart was racing faster then my car. I got super close to the person, then he or she sped up. He got to the finish line first, I got so mad I threw my phone on the bed.
My younger cousin was annoying me making a big deal of losing. So, I touched her face to tell her to be quiet and its not a big deal. She went to tell me off! A blast of energy shot through my body. My hair was standing on its ends. I heard her telling her parents. They said its not a big deal.
It was the biggest relief of my life.


I love the way you’ve linked the descriptions of your reactions when playing the game to the action on the screen. Great writing monnoimus!
How did your younger cousin respond to her parents’ decision?