Chapter 1 the game
Once in 1995 there was a young boy called James and he was always on a video game. Doesn’t matter what game he played he didn’t care. And he berly ever went to school. And when he did he Would always be day dreaming or talking. Once when he was actually at school his class went on a school trip to a science museum he was too busy playing on his phone that he didn’t realize his class left he was there until 6:30pm. But when he released his class went he called his mum and when he got home he had a big surprise waiting for him… when he got home his parents where so relieved he was safe. But they grounded him and they took all of his video games. He was ferocious he went up to his room and stayed in bed for hours. And when he came out he went straight to his friend maxes house. when he got there max was trying to set up this game called
Skeloface. James didn’t tell max he wasn’t allowed on video games so he just joined in and helped
Chapter 2 the way in
James wasn’t really that suspicions about the game but when he saw the game his eyes were widened it was a old game with a skoll on it what is this ”said James . I dont know mr Ryan gave it to me and he said to try and fix it and if I do give it to him. ”Well mite as well try it out” said James ”ok said Max. So Max presed the button in the middle but nothing hapened bus as they where just about to live it something happened and boom! A giant molty coolerd portal came out the game. There jaw came flying open they had never seen eny thing like this bethor, not even in a normol game


Yes KashFishy!
I feel like I know James already, you have started to reveal his personality with such careful descriptions. I love the realistic details, such as his parents being relieved but still grounding him.
Keep writing!