Hi again. Currently I’m making a film and wanted to share the script with you guys!
Scene 1:
ANGEL:
When I’m prime minister, I’ll kill you all.
ASIM:
When I’m prime minister, I’ll make everyone read Fairy Tail.
Megan:
When I’m prime minister, you’ll all listen to Ariana Grande.
Sean:
*singing* When I’m prime minister…
Everyone: shut up.
Ellen: My wee
Miss Allen comes out of her office,
Miss Allen:
Shut up!
Angel
Yeah Asim
Asim
Me?
Angel
Yeah!
Asim goes to punch Angel.
Angel
Oh it’s on!
They fight
Ellen
Lucky there’s popcorn on this table!
She spills the popcorn
People crowd around around Angel and Asim, cheering and chanting
Dr. Bark
Ms? I was outside and I heard children *she shudders* having a good time.
Ms Allen
Everything is just fine.
Asim stands in front of Dr. Bark
Angel punches him but he dodges. She hits Dr. Bark instead.
Dr. Bark
Ms Allen, a word?
Angel
Wow Asim, look what you’ve made me do!
Scene 2:
Everyone is talking.
Ms Allen enters with Dr. Bark.
Ms Allen
People, hello?
Dr. Bark
CHILDREN! *everyone stops* that’s better.
Ms Allen
We have some new rules.
- No talking
- No food
- No Angel
Any objections?
Angel
What? How come no me??
Dr. Bark
You punched me.
Angel
But Asim —
Ellen *eating popcorn*
And no food? Mean!
Asim
SILENCE? I can’t live with this!
Dr. Bark
Well, ms, i’ll be watching. Goodbye.
She exits.
Ms Allen
Look, I’m sorry, but i could get fired!
Angel
This is stupid!
Scene 3:
Asim walks into Ms Allens office.
He holds up a sign.
It reads WHAT ARE YOU DOING?
Ms Allen
I’m trying to think of new rules.
Asim writes on the back of the piece of paper.
It reads A WEEK AFTER AND MORE RULES? MS!
Ms Allen
I’m sorry.
He exits the office.
Ellen pulls out her lunchbox.
Asim points to the sign on the wall. NO FOOD!
Ellen looks sadly at the sign.
Scene 3:
Ms Allen locks up the library.
Ms Allen:
Whoop! Friday!
Angel appears.
Angel stares into Ms Allen’s eyes.
Angel
I’ve been reading up on hypnotism! Now, Ms Allen, *she pulls out her phone* repeat after me. I promise that I will allow Angel to alter the rules and not change them!
Ms Allen repeats sleepily.
Angel
Aww, thanks! And have a good weekend!
Scene 4:
Ms Allen comes into the library. She sees Asim at the door being held back by a bouncer.
Angel is on a chair, being fed popcorn.
Angel waves Ellen away, and stands up.
Angel
Welcome to Angel land!
Ms Allen
What? Why?
Angel
The rules.
Ellen!
Ellen rushes over to Ms Allen with a piece of rolled up paper, and a cup of yellow stuff.
Ellen
Ma’am. Ms Allen, would you like some nutritious apple juice made out of urine?
Ms Allen
NO!
Ellen
Your loss.
She walks off
Ms Allen unrolls the paper and reads the rules.
Ms Allen
The official rules.
- Talking is permitted.
- Food is permitted, as long as you buy Angel a cake.
- No Asim.
Ms Allen
Oh, so that’s why Sean is holding him back?
Sean
I’m not Sean, I’m an official bouncer!
Angel
Oh, and there’s one more, Angel is the queen and gets to decide everything.
Ms Allen
NO! Shut it down!
Angel
Aah, but I have that sorted.
Ms Allen
What about Dr. Bark?
Angel
Don’t worry, i’ve got that sorted!
Cuts to scene where Dr. Bark is on a chair singing Angel is the best.
Ms Allen
But I am the librarian! SHUT IT DOWN!!
Angel
But I too thought of that too.
She pulls out her phone and a video.
Ms Allen *in the video*
My name is Jenny Allen and I would like Angel to alter the rules and I am fine with whatever she does!
Angel
HA! See, I’m amazing and people are stupid!
Megan
Not Bradley.
Angel
NO one cares!
Ms Allen.
No, it can’t be!
Angel
CHECKMATE *laughs evilly*
Ms Allen
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
Fin
Thanks!
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Great script, although the main character seems quite scary!
I’m really looking forward to rereading your script once you’ve posted your disclaimer. ⚡️🎭
I don’t know if you’re aware of this website?
https://www.bbc.co.uk/writersroom/
I thought it would be write up your street. 😉
Keep writing!
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