On December 25 2050 to friends who were could Simon and Jeff lived to gather. Thy went to by some new Fernercher at Ikea. Wen thy got to Ikea it got dark very quick wen thy went in there was a anauonsment on the speakers. “The store will be closing shortly so pleas go to the checkouts”.
The next day on December 26 2050 thy wen camping. Wen thy left the radio said “stay at home don’t lev you’re home and stay out the forest.
Wen thy had built a Fier and there tent thy made there diner it was a chinking stew. wen ty had finish eating the food thy were going to bed wen all of a sudden sirens were going of in the distance then screaming and guns being fired.
There eyes were wide open as thy when in to there tent then thy heard a car pool up behind them that is wen thy met George and tony


Well done for getting started on your scary story, RiterTronSpacs2. Can you describe what happens in a nit more detail at IKEA, giving some clues about the two friends?
Keep writing!
What a foolish pair, heading into the forest in spite of the warning! It sounds like they are in for a terrifying night and I can’t wait to find out if George and Tony are good guys or not.
Do you think they’re foolish? Are you able to add some more information about their friendship, so that the readers invest in them? Did you want to link this to your SCP096 story?