Since I wrote last on my peace of work I talked about what I could do on my scooter. Now its a new year I have my new scooter everyone`s happy… at least I am and ill tell you why. first I got my new scooter I asked for Christmas in my other post called “stunt scooting” I got to go to a indoor skatepark at Sutcliffe Leisure Center and I got LOTS of money for Christmas (£100). This year I have a three stage stunt scooter bucket list its like a normal bucket list but its related to stunt scooter stuff.
did you knowgo to different indoor skateparks the reason its indoor and not outdoor is because outdoor is
Did you know that indoor skateparks are better
the second thing I want to do is learn more tricks (my friend can quadruple whip). And the third thing I want to do is inspire people. now I know this is going to be hard so I’m going to try my hardest to reach my goals.
Thank you for this update on your new scooter yoyopopflash. I’m pleased that everyone is happy after your previous disappointment.
It would be brilliant if you could describe it and what you love most about riding on it.
Keep writing!
Well done yoyopopflash, this is an excellent start to your writing. You have thought carefully about the overall piece and are now in a good place to add detail that will grab the readers’ attention by really showing off your love of scooting.
For example, can you describe what it’s like at the skatepark? Why do you love being there? How does it feel? Why is it like nowhere else? Who else might enjoy going there?
wow yoyopopflas I hop you achieve your goals!!!
wow yoyopopflas I hop you achieve your goals!!!
there is one more thing I want to say is are you able to tell me have you ever gone to the skatepark and it was poring down with rain?
I like this a lot you have pout a lot of information keep it up
I like this a lot you have pout a lot of information
this is some good work
It’s brilliant to see so many responses to your writing, yoyopopflash! We all want to know so much about each of your three goals. Would you be able to write a paragraph about each one?